second post, just to be obnoxious.
this is a narrative for englihs. the teacher is not helpful at all in describing what he wants. he gives us really famous short stories and says "write like this."
This is just a rough draft, but If you guys could help me revise it a bit, and think of ways to make it longer cuz it's 3 pages of a 5 page requirement i'd really appreciate it.( it's horrid and nostaligic!Collapse )